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Diego's route was such a nice read!  Really liked the sweet ending and how much love the MC and him shared.  Honestly really hated Kyrex... what a freaking tool.  

Got pretty far in Tai's route and for a bit I thought I was going to really enjoy that one too but I personally didn't like the Logan thing.  That's just not my cup of tea and I didn't end up finishing it.  Not to say others won't enjoy it though!  I just didn't much.  

I'm really looking forward to seeing what you do with Lukas's route though.  He's such a hunk.  

Great job all around and I'm really looking forward to future updates :)

I won't include any spoilers in this post but I just wanted to leave a quick post to show my appreciation on you creating this body of work...  And honestly?  WHAT A BODY OF WORK.  This was absolutely the best visual novel I have ever read.  I have spent $30 + on other visual novels that have not been half as good as this and for it to be FREE?  I'm gobsmacked.  I really think the thing that sets this apart from others VN on this site and those that you have to pay for is how emotional and heart warming this is.  Without giving too much away, the LOVE and devotion that is portrayed in this VN is really next level.  

I was able to hold my tears until act 3 and then I actually had to step away from my computer for a little while because I was so emotional.  I'm sure those that have read the full thing know which scenes I'm talking about.  I was an absolute mess.  This is the kind of love I want to see in VN and I'm so impressed,

The English translation had a few errors here and there but it wasn't enough to distract from the story or what was being portrayed in a scene.  I highly recommend this to anyone who is looking for a dramatic love story.  10 out of 10.  Just bring tissues.

Super intrigued by this!  It looks like the start of a beautiful romance story... something I can't wait to read more of when you're able to update.  :)

Wow I was pleasantly surprised by how engaging this VN was!  Loving it so far!  Marruk is husband material and I can't wait to see his and the MC's story develop further 

Love that you're communicating what's going on!  Good luck on your finals!

I gotta say... the work that was put into the animations and the background?  Next level stuff right there.  This was SO fun to read through and experience.  I'm really looking forward to watching the romance blossom between Agnarr and the MC.  

I have now finished all the routes up to day 13 and they are all so good... Ridge is my favorite but they honestly are ALL so interesting.  

Wow....

Jin is a freaking gem and I love him so much?  He deserves every good thing EVER.  

That being said, what a great and fun VN!  The hud is so unique and user friendly.  I really love the design of this.  I have so far only finished Jin's route up to day 13 but I can't wait to see the others.  Awesome job :)

Oh thanks for the info!  That's so exciting!  Gahel is definitely my favorite so far so I'm looking forward to the rest!  Great work!  

Loved what I was able to play so far!  Gahel is husband for life material...I can't wait to see more of him and see how his story unfolds with the main character.  Is there going to be routes and stuff like that where you can choose who's story you follow along with?  

Honestly, I loved the puzzle haha!  I failed about 3 times trying to figure it out but because of how Emerson reacted every time I failed, I never felt like it was a bad thing.  It was more engaging and it felt more like I was playing a game vs reading a VN.  The uniqueness of this VN I think comes from the fact that Chapter 1 felt so interactive.  I liked that the puzzle wasn't too easy and actually required you to think and the hints weren't super obvious either.  Just enough to give you a little push in figuring it out.  

No for real like wtf?  lol that was my reaction when I read that.

Um HELLO?  This was a wonderful short little read oh my gosh.  Yes this had hunky muscle men in it but this was ultimately a fantastical love story and that feels harder to come by in this genre of VN's.  Mostly it's just about the pr0n lol.  And what a love story.  This was well worth the money spent.  The writing was great, the art was great and my romantic heart was fully satisfied at the end.  Thanks so much for putting this out into the world :)

Congrats on releasing the first part of this fantastic VN!  I'm still currently reading through it but I gotta say, the art style is absolutely a 10 outa 10.  It feels more interactive than most VN's I've seen recently and the characters are amazing.  The work you've put into this project is evident.  This feels like a VN that I would have no problem paying full price for a completed version.  Seriously well done and I look forward to seeing what more you do with it.  :)

I legit just started reading this and I'm cackling over the art style and animation.  It's so well done!  I have such a crush on Tom...  I look forward to continuing it :)

Wanted to drop a comment and say this really was worth the download!  It's on the shorter side but with 5 different routes to choose from, it's still a joy to read.  

...Zed was absolutely my favorite.  He must be protected at all costs.